One Pucked Up Pack

The story in itself isn’t bad, but the character names are not in sync with their backstories. Also, I’m pretty sure a Finnish character doesn’t have a Norwegian or Scottish accent. It takes away from the story… The world is a bit confusing, and there is almost no explanation as to how this world is set up. The book is very long with a lot of drama. Many times I’ve looked at the progress and thought “WTF else is going to happen if there’s so much time left!”