The story could’ve been very good, however the amount of he said, he said, she said is getting annoying. What happened to words like quipped, replied, shot back etc. Also, the connection between the female main character and the male characters is weird. They hardly know each other and hit it up, then she moves on to the next and the next, without any mention of guilt or doubt or anything like that. The world building is rather flawed, a lot of pieces are missing.
Manon
10-10-2023
The story could’ve been very good, however the amount of he said, he said, she said is getting annoying. What happened to words like quipped, replied, shot back etc. Also, the connection between the female main character and the male characters is weird. They hardly know each other and hit it up, then she moves on to the next and the next, without any mention of guilt or doubt or anything like that. The world building is rather flawed, a lot of pieces are missing.